So here are both of my unfinished project 1 images please feel free to mock me incessantly. If I do not here mockery I will hurl a chair at someone!!!!!! Let the MOCKERY BEGIN!!!
Love the illustrations and totally see them both fit the article, the similar vision I had of the sea Captian on the hunt for his prey. VERY COOL ..another good cartoonish example.
I wouldn't say complete mockery, you really have most of the image done and mainly you have the idea out there, there's only that little bits of value and small details that could be added to further improve your idea. I think your idea is great and would like to see a more finished version! :)
Great ideas boiling, man. You just need to finish. That sailor one can be done in a ton of different ways. I commented in class how you can add scale and a tail to the sailor and he'd be a T-Rex. All jokes aside I would love to see these finished.
Very simple but gets the point across...uncertain whether that is a human hand or monkey coming out of the trash can?
ReplyDeletei like the first one best, simple and funny
ReplyDeleteI think that finishing the first example would be best. I prefer humor over violence.
ReplyDeleteVery simple shapes, easy to understand. Well drawn deck
ReplyDeleteI like the second one better. I would recommend focusing on 1 concept and finishing it rather than have 2 unfinished concepts.
ReplyDeleteI like the first one, the second one is kinda sad
ReplyDeleteMOCKERY I WANT MOAR MOCKERY HERE!
ReplyDeleteI might be morbid but I really like this one. Captain Ahab finally getting his "white whale".
ReplyDeleteMOAR, you say? Maybe MOAR time. But you lost your files, so I can't really blame you!
ReplyDeleteI like the first one the best, I think if you were to finish it it would look great. Very nice idea.
ReplyDeleteThey're both illustrated really well, nice colors and details in them. They both match each other also.
ReplyDeleteThe second one is pretty cool, sad but cool The texture on the wood is really well done.
ReplyDeleteLove the illustrations and totally see them both fit the article, the similar vision I had of the sea Captian on the hunt for his prey. VERY COOL ..another good cartoonish example.
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure I understand either of them. Especially the first one. Is that a human hand, or monkey hand? Both images are rather flat and static.
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't say complete mockery, you really have most of the image done and mainly you have the idea out there, there's only that little bits of value and small details that could be added to further improve your idea. I think your idea is great and would like to see a more finished version! :)
ReplyDeleteI'm assuming that's the monkey's hand in the first image. I don't mind the flat coloring but I think a little value could be added in some areas.
ReplyDeleteNice use of vector work.
ReplyDeleteGreat ideas boiling, man. You just need to finish. That sailor one can be done in a ton of different ways. I commented in class how you can add scale and a tail to the sailor and he'd be a T-Rex. All jokes aside I would love to see these finished.
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